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It's Okay to Make Mistakes 

 

✦  Summary

This article is about how it's okay to make mistakes. It explains how Tom and Jane make mistakes sometimes. The main point is that mistakes help them grow into better versions of themselves. When people make mistakes, they can learn, improve and feel proud.

 

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✦  My Opinion

I think it's okay to make mistakes because everyone makes mistakes, it's okay because we can learn new things from them. First, teachers can help me at school when I make mistakes. It's okay because I am still young and learning, some mistakes help me understand better. Another reason is that mistakes can be fixed. When I don't follow the rules at school, I can apologize to my friends and fix what happened. Lastly, I can learn the right things by making different mistakes at school. To conclude it's okay to make mistakes because they help us learn, grow, and become better people. 

 

홍다희 하탑초등학교 3학년

Kids  Article Writing 

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